good going
you're only 3 years too late with all the jokes you pointed out
actually no, you didn't make real jokes about it, just physical humor kind of kiddie crap.
The animation itself obviously had a lot of effort put into it, but at the same time it seems sloppy or half-done in most places. The jokes themselves were, on repeat, just slapstick "haha someone got hurt" sadist humor. Not to say Fallout isn't spiritually sadistic by nature, especially in its black humor, but this isn't the same.
I'm not saying it has to BE Fallout's brand of funny. This just wasn't funny.