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[marilol]

jeez

it's hideous tweened trash. Oh well.

[Gurl Gamers]

half-decent animation

Good job not crediting the EXACT SOURCE of the comic.

http:// fc04.deviantart.net/fs27/f/2008/153/c /7/Girl_Gamers_by_FizTheAncient.png

I love how you sorted this under "comedy - ORIGINAL" for something that you had no creative part in other than visual representation, which is basically an animated copy of exactly what's in the comic.

Congrats on getting an award for something that wasn't your idea and not saying a single word about who actually did it.

Sapphire posting a tinypic link for a source in the audio isn't the same thing.

I posted a 7 in hopes that you'll properly cite the source after reading this.

I actually loathe this sloppy animation but I don't want my point to be undercut by personal opinion.

[SailorMan]

oh god

fuck yes

[The Red Line.]

OH NO, JD

It's a nice little video, and I can see a good amount of effort and dedication to it

of course, I'm a prude so I see a million ways this could be better without anything worth pointing out. the whole "outlined" feel to it looks weird. Had you tried using more color-oriented style, it'd look better, especially with the titular red trail.

For a venture out of the usual offensive shit, this is half-decent, but only in the way a class project by someone who doesn't usually do anything even slightly related is decent, y'know?

"not emotional/deep enough" is my general complaint, but saying it's not up to my standards doesn't mean it wasn't good in it's own way.

10JD responds:

Thanks flak, I used the blank format as an experiment with the drawing. If i could get decent looking drawings, then It will look better with color. I debated submitting this at first, because the content does not fit me at all but Im hungry for input.

You could say I treated this like a school project. Cause it did come out like one.

Always glad to see a review from one of the bro's,

[Failout]

good going

you're only 3 years too late with all the jokes you pointed out

actually no, you didn't make real jokes about it, just physical humor kind of kiddie crap.

The animation itself obviously had a lot of effort put into it, but at the same time it seems sloppy or half-done in most places. The jokes themselves were, on repeat, just slapstick "haha someone got hurt" sadist humor. Not to say Fallout isn't spiritually sadistic by nature, especially in its black humor, but this isn't the same.

I'm not saying it has to BE Fallout's brand of funny. This just wasn't funny.

[asdfcollab]

I wish I could actually finish

but my tolerance for half-done garbage can only last so long

I honestly can't stand any of this. The only solid thing about this is, literally, the line tool.

It demonstrates that none of you know how to make a coherent flash animation that isn't half-done stick figure Kris Wilson wannabe bullshit. A year? Wow, that's affably pathetic.

The jokes were so flat it was painful. Some Invader Zim Jhonen Vasquez LOLSORANDOM bullshit with half-assed teenage male voices who probably aren't even allowed to scream without getting in trouble with their parents.

I am somewhat livid that all of you fuckers had the audacity to try to pass off shape tools and motion tweens as good enough animation to show collaboration. The only one with any unnatural shapes was maybe Thundaboom16's use of mouths, and the movement was so bizarre and unfitting that I caught myself cringing at the fucked up syncing.

All of you learn to animate. Actually, learn to draw first. I've never met a good animator who couldn't draw.

2 stars because a year of dedication to such a shitty collab is worth at least SOMETHING.

thies responds:

Dude, don't take this so serious. It didnt take A YEAR to make this. The overall time from the start to end of this collab was a (really) small year, with working on it on and off, and waiting for parts.

And what do teen voices have to do with this? So people can only voice act when the have a low adult man voice?

Yes, the characters look simple. But thats what freaking asdf is.

Calm down.

[Sergeant Shadman]

based on a true story

goddamn this is great, I'm gonna miss that fucker when he goes to armed services

[Hulalaoo Gif]

it's alex

jerk

[Alfred's Playhouse Pt. 1]

sickening

this is a fantastic flash. It's so shocking and horrid in it's themes and delivery I'm really just left speechless in how much is going on here

seriously some good stuff, probably with more depth than I can even begin to wrap my head around.

[Madness Confliction]

beyond boss

I will seriously rage if this doesn't get first. The animation is fucking butter and the PoVs used are insane.

Hulalaoo, you're an incredible animator and are only getting better. Keep up the fine-ass work.

Hulalaoo responds:

Fuk u axel