well
it comes off as a tasteless thunderhumor-inspired short written by someone who never actually played the game but instead figured he could do a satire on it entirely off of broad assumptions (like dwarves being in the game) and shit heard on the internet. Namely, horned helmet, fusrodah, arrow to the knee, buckethead, BUT NO WAIT THE ARROW TO THE KNEE PART MESSED UP AND HE TOOK AN ARROW TO THE DICK LOL XD
come the fuck on
also the animation is nothing short of painful. Your animations move like they suffer merely for existing, which would be cool if you were doing a tragedy or horror short but you're obviously preferring the juvenile humor route