great job ripping off Soul Eater
I bet you're REAL PROUD of how you traced Maka and Soul.
What's icing on the cake is that each of those stupid ghost things has messed up eyes/stitches because you have no clue how to do anything that isn't line-art for anime bullshit imitation.
You know how anime artists learned to draw?
They studied real life art, THEN they heavily stylized it to an anime form. There's no faggot out there who actually picked up a pen one day and started doing anime perfectly, or one who was doing the exact same thing from high school to a job in the industry. They all had to prove their salt artistically before they got anywhere.
The crucial "real life" part of the artistic chain is completely missing here, and it fucking shows. This is your best work submitted? I'll bet if you showed this to anybody with actual taste in the arts, they'd burst out fucking laughing. Have fun trying to make a portfolio out of this weeaboo garbage.