Sheller's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bonk me]

what are these "proportions" they speak of?

serious, dawg, this anatomy is goofed the fuck out.

Anime expressions don't excuse lack of foundation.

the hands look a little crippled, and there's too many little things for me to go over actually so bringing up hands is a moot point. Here's an important one: clothes don't work that way, hell breasts don't even work that way. Their clothes are shiny or something? idk

Sin-sister responds:

All fair points. This was, more or less, my first drawing in this genre, I didn't have a lot of practice before-hand.

Thanks for the review, but perhaps you should comment on something more recent

[bromo the brony]

my favorite fanpony

next to doctor whooves of course

[Brony-Con (Bronies End Title)]

oh man

dis shit bombastic dog

[Dishes]

keep imitating macfarlane

I'm sure that equates talent in some parallel cross-dimensional existence out there.

[25 Expressions Patchman]

hrgh

it's almost like you had to google search the meaning to half of these so you could comprehend what sort of spectrum of emotion you're supposed to display, and then forgot halfway and said "fuck it, it looks funny and that's all that counts lolololo!"

I'm usually hard pressed to find someone who does this challenge and manages to fuck up even the most basic things such as disgust, confusion, etc.

He doesn't look disgusted, he looks uncomfortable. He doesn't look confused, he looks stunned or bewildered. Your "serious" face looks like the blank face. The "blank" face looks tired. The "tired" face looks slightly discomforted or maybe a bit sick. Pouty just looks nothing like any emotion I've seen besides those from a cat out of a cartoon show.

Where's the "holier-than-thou belief whore" expression? The one he has as he smugly shoves his world views in users' faces, acting like they know what they're talking about through empty metaphors and stubborn refusal to acknowledge differing insights?

[One of These Days]

hideous

You're not going to get scouted for a long, long time if this was done a week ago.

There is honestly NOTHING to this photo I can say I don't hate, you need to drop this "style" bullshit and start trying to do art like an actual artist instead of copying your favorite flash animators or whatever the fuck it is you could have possibly thought to come up with such an abhorrent "style" you've developed.

The only thing I can say is that I've seen worse, but really I'm just saying this shit isn't as bad as maggot-fiilled intestines.

[Padre de Hulalaoo]

oh god

I loved that video

[u mad bro?]

HAHA OH MAN

This is so funny, clearly not dated or overdone at all, MAN this is funny

Jae responds:

thanks man hah

[Kirika-Galaxy]

well fuck

as much work as you put into it, it'd be really swell if you had the capacity to simply fullview what you're doing and see how fucking cluttered the entire piece is. The composition of everything is fucked, and it doesn't matter how "good" you draw; you could have a million good things in the wrong places, and they'll just look like shit as a whole, which is what's happening here. The shitty GIMP effects I can let slide seeing that it's all you do without restraint; the figure itself is moderately better than usual (although still filled with crippling disfigurations), but goddamn, all you had to do was add some TINY DEGREE of negative space between the subject and the background, and shit would look 20 times better.

You know, negative space, the shit your art teacher would go over time and time again but for some reason you sought to only use it once because she said so and never again?

DragonPunch responds:

What's negative space?

[A.E. - The Black]

photoshop abuse

good job poorly cropping the eye. Hell, I could see evidence from wherever you might have lifted it from still attached around the rim. Could have easily just drawn over it again to give a sketchier look, but that's just too damn hard, isn't it?

The hair looks like you just stroked a couple times with multibrush effects. The body looks like one amorphous blob you just lightly dashed with grey to give the effect that there should be something there. The general shape of the head looks like some sort of fucked up jelly bean, which to a degree I find comedic, but obviously this isn't the tone you're aiming for.